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by **Framboesa** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:17 pm

Ok, here's my first work. A little bit bloody, I know... +::biggrin

I want to receive lots of critics please! I know it's not an amazing work, don't just say "It's bad" tell me why it's bad and what should I change!
Thank you!

by **Indinera** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:49 pm

BATHORY!!!

by **Framboesa** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:59 pm

Errr... what does that mean? +:oops:

by **Indinera** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 2:21 pm

Google "Bathory" :razz:

by **Huskyy** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 5:17 pm

Elizabeth Bathory(Báthory Erzsébet) was a Hungarian noblewoman,who was said to be the killer of many young maidens just to bathe in their blood and with that make herself young.Of course it's not true,but it seems people like to make up stories like this just to thrill themselves... +::biggrin

by **Framboesa** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 6:36 pm

Lol

I "googled" Bathory and read her story. I can assure you I didn't got my inspiration from her. So,no critics? Just bathory? +::biggrin

by **Indinera** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:19 pm

I like the composition and the gore. +::biggrin

by **Framboesa** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:16 pm

And what about the things that you don't like? +::biggrin

by **Indinera** » Mon Aug 17, 2009 9:16 pm

Nothing in particular lol

by **mellowkat** » Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:05 am

I love the hair on it!! Maybe try a bit of shading to create depth and detail!

by **Framboesa** » Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:19 pm

Thank you all! Mellowkat I'm not very good with shades, it's better not to do nothing instead if ruin the drawing. +::biggrin

But thank you for the tip

by **Huskyy** » Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:45 pm

If you never try it,you'll never learn it!That's my experience about shading.I was always afraid to use it,but after some drawings,you get into it!

by **grisel1** » Wed Aug 26, 2009 11:15 am

wow its just like a vampire +::O_o

by **Framboesa** » Sat Aug 29, 2009 9:13 pm

grisel1 wrote:wow its just like a vampire

But she's not drinking the victim's blood..

@Huskyy: Nah, too early for me +::biggrin

by **grisel1** » Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:12 am

its beacuse of the hair and the gown.

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